From our feedback we discovered that most of the conventions and mise-en-scene was correct for the genre we were doing, and the audience suggested that you could tell from the the visuals that the genre was rap. We also found that the lip sync could have been improved. We found this difficult as our performer seems to mumble and this was also one of the criticisms we were given.
Someone commented of the pace of editing, which is something we wanted to get right, as most rap videos have fast pace editing but we also wanted to slow paced editing in there.
The 3rd comment about the features being typical can be seen as good and bad, we obviously wanted to make it recognizable as a rap video, however we wanted it to be different in parts as well to make it stand out.
The 4th comment again is something we wanted to do, cut it to the beat which is good that someone has recognized that we have done that and succeeded mostly in, however we have obviously not done it perfectly throughout.